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Amy ([personal profile] such_heights) wrote2006-12-20 06:11 pm

Good Omens ficlet

Written for [livejournal.com profile] melandry, archived here for posterity.

Aziraphale/Crowley, 400 words, PG. Based on 'There Is A Light That Never Goes Out' by The Smiths.



They’d been driving through the darkness for some time now, not really heading anywhere especially – just seeing where the road took them. Orange street lights flashed above them in a droning pattern.

One. Two. Three.

Crowley sighed. The truth of it was, things had become a little dull of late. Much as he enjoyed doing as little as possible, there’d been a certain something in sav- no, preserving the world. He thought Aziraphale probably felt the same. They felt the same about a fair few things these days – far more than they should, Crowley was sure. He wondered when they would just meet in the middle; it was inevitable, really.

Even Freddie Mercury sounded muted tonight. Crowley drummed his fingers restlessly against a wheel, and then drove straight over a roundabout, just for something to do. Aziraphale seemed unable to disapprove, just shook his head and glanced at Crowley before his gaze slid inexorably back to the thudding monotony of the streetlights.

One. Two. Three.

After a while, Aziraphale spoke, and Crowley started at the sound.

“Where are we going?”

“Anywhere, anywhere, I don’t care.” Crowley waved an arm around vaguely.

Aziraphale smiled. “Alright then.”

The road dipped down into a darkened underpass, and Crowley nearly spoke. But a strange fear gripped him, and so he said nothing, just drove on. After the next set of traffic lights (which were always green), then he’d try.

One. Two. Three.

“Angel--” he started, and the word sat strange on his tongue tonight.

Angel. Undying light. Ineffability and eternal goodness and redemption. All the things that he ought to be sickened by, and he is, mostly. But Crowley was an angel once.

They felt the same about a fair few things these days.

Aziraphale was looking at him with a soft sort of confusion, and Crowley abandoned driving completely (the Bentley could take care of itself). Suddenly he found himself not having to say anything at all, to his intense relief. He just smiled, in a helpless way, and Aziraphale’s eyes fluttered shut for a moment.

Crowley was glad they’d got that settled. He glanced outside, where they appeared to have driven straight on ‘til morning. Those garish street lamps were fading now, just glimmering points remaining.

With a touch like feathers, Crowley was drawn away. There were some lights that never went out.

[identity profile] shortstack88.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I could use some fluffy lily/james? would you mind terribly? only if you get a chance though >.>

[identity profile] ladygrey-lj.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so sweet (and I'm not even into Good Omens fandom). Beautifully written, too. And thank you for your Christmas card, it arrived Monday :)
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[identity profile] melandry.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Now everyone can see the lovely thing that you wrote me. :)

I love the POV you used for this. I must admit that for relatively superficial reasons I had always thought of this prompt, when I thought of it as an A/C prompt, from Aziraphale's POV, but it works so nicely here with Crowley, particularly the bits that directly quote the lyrics.

I'm quite fond of the ending, also, particularly the way "Crowley was glad they’d got that settled" conveys both how well the two of them know each other and how nervous Crowley is, especially when it comes to actually saying what he thinks/feels.

Thanks again for the delightful Christmas gift!

[identity profile] archon-mentha.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this so much, the soft voice it is told in, and the rhythm of driving and street lights through it. Very lovely.

[identity profile] secondsilk.livejournal.com 2006-12-26 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's lovely.
I love the idea of them bored, listless, after the lack of an apocalypse.
Very Crowley. :-)

[identity profile] shinzuku.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the last one.

[identity profile] foxxfire5.livejournal.com 2008-10-18 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This is adorable. And very much them in the way they communicate without words. Cute. :D

[identity profile] foxxfire5.livejournal.com 2008-10-19 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome! :D