ext_104615 ([identity profile] vwl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] such_heights 2008-04-29 04:36 am (UTC)

Beautiful, you mix dialogue and introspection wonderfully. I love the nuaces of Sirius' mental state, not quite normal (as well it shouldn't be), but not too far out either. That in itself is a feat I have yet to accomplish--mixing the crazy with the stability and achieving a believable go-between.

Nice work. :]

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